Draft monograph: GHRP-6 — submissions
The 11 submissions received, published in full with declared interests and secretariat responses.
§2Submissions and responses
11 submissions were received. Each is published in full below with its declared interest, the secretariat response and the disposition. The Institute publishes submissions it did not accept in the same form as those it did.
The monograph should state what the compound costs
The respondent states that a reader deciding whether to pursue treatment needs to know what it costs, and that omitting price makes the assessment less useful than it could be.
The respondent proposes that a price range be recorded for each compound with the source and date.
The secretariat does not accept this submission. Price varies by jurisdiction, payer, presentation and date to a degree that no single figure could survive, and a stale price is worse than no price.
No price is recorded. The monograph records the presentations available and the regulatory status in each jurisdiction, which are the facts the Institute can verify and maintain. The submission remains published in full.
The same concept is given three different names in one document
The draft refers to the same quantity as a response rate, a responder proportion and a categorical outcome in different sections. The respondent, who works in health-technology assessment, states that a reader cannot tell whether the three refer to one thing or to three.
The respondent proposes that the glossary term be used at every occurrence and that the glossary entry be linked at first use in each section rather than only at first use in the document.
The secretariat accepts this submission. The variation was stylistic and its cost to the reader exceeds any benefit.
A single term is now used throughout for each defined concept, and the glossary entry is linked at first use within each section rather than once per document.
Every contributing trial shares one sponsor and the monograph does not say so
The respondent, who has published a systematic review of this literature, states that all of the contributing trials for the principal outcome were conducted by a single sponsor, and that this is a property of the evidence base rather than a criticism of any individual trial.
The respondent proposes that sponsor concentration be recorded as a characteristic of the evidence base in the certainty assessment rather than as a note in the discussion.
The secretariat accepts this submission. Sponsor concentration bears on what an independent replication would add, and the draft recorded it where a reader was least likely to see it.
Sponsor concentration is now stated with the certainty rating, and the monograph records how many independent sponsors contributed evidence to each assessed outcome.
The document should state what a reader ought to do
The draft assesses evidence and stops. The respondent, a practising clinician, states that a reader arriving at the document with a decision to make is left to convert an assessment into an action without help, and proposes that each document close with a recommendation.
The respondent argues that other evidence bodies issue recommendations and that declining to do so transfers the difficult part of the work to the reader.
The secretariat does not accept this submission, and records that the point is a reasonable one rather than a misunderstanding.
The Institute assesses evidence and does not issue recommendations, because a recommendation embeds values and a resource context that the Institute does not hold and cannot state. That constitutional limit is published on the methodology page and is not varied by consultation. The submission remains published in full.
Anti-drug antibody data are omitted
The respondent states that immunogenicity is measured in the development programmes of peptide therapeutics and that the monograph does not report it, leaving a reader unable to judge whether loss of effect over time has an immunological explanation.
The respondent proposes that anti-drug antibody incidence and its relation to effect be reported for every compound in the series.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. Immunogenicity is reported where a contributing trial reported it. The proposal to report it for every compound is declined because for many compounds in the series no such data exist and a uniformly empty row is not informative.
Anti-drug antibody incidence and any reported association with loss of effect are now reported where measured, and recorded as not measured where the contributing trials did not assess them.
A purity figure from a certificate is quoted as though it were a content figure
The draft quotes a purity percentage from supply documentation in a sentence about how much compound a vial contains. Chromatographic purity is a relative area within what was detected; it is not a mass fraction and it does not bound vial content.
The respondent, an analytical chemist, proposes that purity and content never appear in the same sentence without an explicit statement that they answer different questions.
The secretariat accepts this submission. The conflation is the error the Institute most often corrects in supply documentation, and it appeared in an Institute draft.
Purity and content are now reported in separate rows with separate definitions, and the monograph states that a purity figure sets no bound on content and that a content figure requires a determination against a standard of assigned content.
Trials are described as terminated where they completed as planned
The respondent states that the draft uses the word terminated for trials stopped at pre-specified interim analyses, for trials stopped for futility and for trials closed for commercial reasons, and that these are three different facts.
The respondent proposes that the status vocabulary be fixed and defined in the glossary.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. The vocabulary is fixed and defined. The proposal to distinguish commercial closure from futility in every case is accepted only where the Institute holds a document stating the reason.
Trial status now uses a fixed vocabulary defined in the glossary, and where the reason for stopping is not evidenced by a document the Institute holds, the status is recorded as stopped with the reason not established rather than assigned.
The monograph should reproduce the approved labelling rather than paraphrase it
The submission is made on behalf of the marketing-authorisation holder. It states that the draft paraphrases the approved indication, the posology and the contraindications, and that any paraphrase risks diverging from the authorised text.
The sponsor asks that the authorised wording be reproduced verbatim in each case, and offers the current summary of product characteristics as the source.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. The authorised indication and the contraindications are reproduced verbatim and attributed. The posology is not, because the monograph reports what the trials administered as well as what the labelling authorises, and the two are frequently different.
The approved indication and contraindications are now reproduced verbatim from the named authorisation with its version and date, and the posology section reports the labelled schedule and the schedules studied side by side, with the source of each stated.
The monograph does not tell a reader that a stated mass may be substantially counter-ion and water
The draft quotes vial contents in milligrams without stating whether the figure refers to peptide content or to total solids. For an acetate or trifluoroacetate salt of a peptide, the difference between the two can exceed a fifth of the stated mass.
The respondent, an analytical chemist, states that this is the single most consequential misreading in the field and that a monograph that does not address it directly is leaving the reader to discover it.
The secretariat accepts this submission. Moderate certainty evidence from published analytical surveys suggests that content and total solids are routinely conflated in supply documentation, and the draft did not warn the reader.
The monograph now states, at the point where vial contents are first mentioned, that a mass figure is uninterpretable unless it states whether it is peptide content or total solids, and cross-references the content standard in the analytical series.
The preclinical section is extensive and the clinical section is not
The draft summarises a large animal literature and a small or absent human literature. The respondent states that the resulting document reads as though a great deal is known, when what is known concerns rodents.
The respondent proposes that the preclinical section be reduced to a statement of what has been observed in animals and that the detail be removed entirely.
The secretariat accepts this submission in part. The section is shortened and given a standing statement. The proposal to remove the detail is declined, because a reader encountering claims derived from that literature needs to be able to see what it actually contains.
The preclinical section is reduced in length, placed after the clinical assessment rather than before it, and opens with a standing statement that an effect observed in an animal model is not a clinical outcome and does not support a certainty rating.
The indication table mixes approved indications with uses for which the compound is merely supplied
The indication table lists indications in a single sequence. Some are approved by a competent authority, some are the subject of trials that have not reported, and some are uses observed in supply with no trial evidence at all.
The respondent, employed by a national competent authority and writing in a personal capacity, states that the three categories should not share a table without being distinguished in it.
The secretariat accepts this submission. A shared table is an implicit claim of comparable standing.
The indication table now carries a status column with three values, approved, under investigation and supplied without trial evidence, and the value is stated for every row. Rows in the third category also state that no certainty rating is assigned because there is no evidence base to rate.
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